“What good is putting your head on the ground
If you can not feel God’s presence around.
Such a divine presence can not be felt
If your thoughts belong to Earth and are drowned.”
{~Umr~}
Written: 3rd October 2012.
Just an amateur poet jotting down mind's mumblings. .........................................................................................................
What a beautiful expression.
🙂
Good stuff! I followed your blog and I look forward to seeing more of your poetry! I am just beginning as you may have noticed I am learning the very basics of writing 55 different forms of poetry. I enjoy writing Ghazal as well. Hopefully you will follow me as well and we can encourage and critique one another! I need serious help with writing in rhythm. Ciao for now!
Thanks for appreciation! 🙂 I too like ghazals. Sure, I’ll follow your blog… Although, I’m but an amateur 🙂
Very nice thought.
Enchanting words put me straight into Rumi’s swinging world .. Beautiful Umr ..
Thank You! 🙂
HI Stalking Dawn. Thank you for liking my poem ‘ The Haunted Location’. The Foureyed Poet.
strongly agree
pleasure to know you and read your thoughts—– stay blessed ameen ❤